Saturday, December 13, 2008

Rewrite

True friends tell you when your writing stinks in a nice way! Thanks, to great feedback, I have rewritten the first chapter of "Unveiled" and I think it is MUCH better.

Check it our for yourself. The link is: http://www.webook.com/project/The-Unveiling

1 comment:

Barbara(aka Layla) said...

Yes indeed, a true friend is the kind that will give you constructive criticism! I am going to go look at your rewrite.